Hi students,
This is the place where you can write a good ending to your short story. As you know, the winner will get an extra homework bonus.
Good work!
This is your story after we have corrected it in class:
Yesterday something very strange happened to me.
When I went to the restaurant, a band asked me to play with them. For the first time in my life, I sang a rock song and I loved it. It was awesome because my favourite band was there watching.
At the end of the concert, my favourite band came to me and invited me to be one of the vocalists of the band. My friends saw me in television.
I felt really good because I was famous and I ran to the mobile to invite all my friends and family to a fantastic karaoke party. I did not realize why the photographers who follwed us were always near me and not near my friends.
I guess I wasn´t giving attention to my friends.
I was always talking to the media.
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Suddenly, an agency found me and contracted me to form a new band with my friends. We had lots of fun yesterday.
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Suddenly my band and I become one of the most listened band of the moment and I felt truly fine.
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So i decided to change.
ReplyDelete"Stop!" I said " I´m not this person!"
The media took more photos.
I was really freaking out.
"Go away" I told them.
Suddenly, they stopped and went away.
I didn´t understand because it was too strange but that was good.
Finally, I could be with my friends.
I realized that my friends were more important than being famous.