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This is the place where you can write a good ending to your short story. As you know, the winner will get an extra homework bonus.
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This is your story after we have corrected it in class:
Yesterday something very strange happened to me.
I didn’t know what it was. I went there and there was a dog, a very strange dog. It spoke and was very intelligent. I took the dog home. My life became much better.
The dog helped me out on my homework, on my day-to-day life and it had great ideas on how to improve my social skills. I am now a better person.
All of a sudden the dog changed into another character. It became a dragon. The Dragon asked me to ride on his back, and then it flew into the past to the Great Wall of China.
But, suddenly, we moved to another place called Portugal and some people killed it because they were afraid of it.
I became very sad and I declared war to the Portuguese people.
The Portuguese people were trying to kill me, but no one knew about the murder of my poor dragon.
I was not afraid of them and I resisted, but then ...
I ran. I trained my strength and my courage to face those people who treated me so badly and that killed my best friend.
After that, I turned and saw all those people who were so cowardly, unfair and bad, but I did not want to do the same as they did, so I followed my long and difficult path.
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In my way I met another dog that is normal. This dog is like the other dogs, scratches himself and licks himself, but I love it. And this is my new best friend forever and will follow me in my long and difficult path.
ReplyDeleteThen, i travaled to china by airplane and there i found a dog as same as the other one and it spoke too.
ReplyDeleteBut then, the dog said to me:
- This is all a dream, Wake up!
I woke up and i saw my mother yelling:
- WAKE UP, WAKE UP!
She saw i was awake and asked me:
- Were you having a nightmare, honey?
- That's okay, everything is fine now.
The End!
After my best friend´s death and my victory against the Humankind, we can now assist to the Glory of my Best Friend on the Stadium of the Dragon, Porto.
ReplyDeleteAt last, the fight between me and the portuguese people endend. And I took the best.
ReplyDeleteRui Lopes Nº 25
After all the battles against the portuguese people and having lost people I loved most, I decided to give a better future to my best friend, he was,forever, in my heart.
ReplyDeleteWell, after the difficult battle against the portuguese people, I met a female dragon named Susan.
ReplyDeleteIt was love at first sight. She had a dragon boyfriend so I challenged him to a duel. I won and my prize was the beautiful female dragon!
The end!