Hi, students!
This is the place where you can write a good ending to your short story. As you know, the winner will get an extra homework bonus.
Good work!
This is your story after we have corrected it in class:
Yesterday something very strange happened to me.
I was walking in the park when a guy took me to a bar. He wanted me to take some drinks. We had some drinks and I got drunk. When I got home, my wife was waiting for me.
After that my wife was angry with me and put me out of home.
Then I went to the airport and I travelled to Oporto (Valadares).
When I arrived in Oporto I met a beautiful Portuguese girl. She was very beautiful but I didn't speak Portuguese very well and something happened...
Her boyfriend arrived and I felt very disappointed. But she gave me her phone number. Her boyfriend was angry.
After that I called her, but she didn’t answer, because she had turned off her phone. Later I called her to clarify the misunderstanding with her boyfriend.
She told me that her boyfriend had broken up with her and she was very disappointed and sad.
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I told him my story with my wife. She felt ridiculous, but like my way of being. Soon we started dating, got married and later had two children.
ReplyDeleteI was very hangry because of that and went to her ex-boyfriend`s house. Later, i woke up and felt bad because I was in the hospital. He hit me. I stayed there for two months and guess who was with me... She was very friendly and, at the end, we were just good friends.
ReplyDeleteI returned to London. My wife forgave me. I stopped drinking. Me and my wife had four children. When they were 18, they began to drink.
ReplyDeleteAftre that mi life became, again, a real mess.
The end!!!!
I married whith her.End!!!!
ReplyDeleteThen I travelled to Brazil where I met a very beautiful brazilian. After I Knew her,we became friends but I had to return to London to go to my wife. When I got there we spoke and decided get divorced. Then returned to Brazil and I married to the Brazilian girl, had three children and live very happy. The End!!!
ReplyDeleteI invited her to talk and share her pain.She still loves her boyfriend.We decided to meet(all the three)at her home.When I arrived...
ReplyDelete- Oh! my God! I´m going to faint!
Can you imagine?!
Her boyfriend is my brother.
END.
knocked on my brother and then leaves home because they had not believed what she had just turned and went to Japan for not seeing more.
ReplyDeletethe end.
Miguel Angelo nº 22 7ºB
Excuse me wrong
ReplyDeleteI knocked on my brother and ran away from home because he did not believe in what my wife had just turned and ran away to Japan because I did not want to see more in life. End
miguel angelo 7ºb nº22
Excuse me wrong
ReplyDeletequando vi que era o meu irmao...
I knocked on my brother and ran away from home because he did not believe in what my wife had just turned and ran away to Japan because I did not want to see more in life. End
miguel angelo 7ºb nº22
her boyfriend is my best friend and I knew when I asked him many excuses, and he obviously had to accept my apologies, because I was the best friend he still his.But demure but agreed to accept
ReplyDeleteWhen i tried to console her my mom came home and puch my ears saying that I should not talk to strangers. I was very embarrassed because the girl was still listening to the conversation by phone.
ReplyDeleteBut I learned my lesson: do not talk to girls while not leaving the house of my mother.
Inês Lameiras nº13 7ºB
Thanks for the opportunity teacher.