1.I wrote "I visited so mutch iportant citys" 1.I should have written "I visited so many iportant cities". 2.I wrote "It´s funny". 2.I should have written "It was funny". 3.I wrote "I like a lot walk near the lake(...)" 3.I should have written "I like walking near the lake(...)". Júlia da Silva 8ºA
In the previous post, I wrote: "I only stayed in Leiria like two days" and "The most boring part of my holidays was be at home" - and I should have written: "I only stayed in Leria for two days" and "The most boring part of my holidays was being at home".
1- I wrote “In this holidays”, and I should have written “In these holidays”. 2- I wrote “a 8 year old”, and I should have written “an 8 year old”. 3- I wrote “was passed”, and I should have written “was spent”. 4- I wrote “finnish”, and I should have written “finish”. 5- I wrote “very cool travel”, and I should have written “very cool trip”. 6- I wrote “bodyboard”, and I should have written “body board”. 7- I wrote “and now begins a new journey”, and I should have written “and now a new journey begins”.
Hello teacher! These are my mistakes: I wrote "stayed for home" and I should have written "stayed at home" I wrote "...grandmother's house" and I should have written "...grandmother's" Finaly I wrote "These are my holidays" and I should have written "These were my holidays" because it's past.
1 I wrote i , and I should have written I went to the pool. 2 I wrote puppie , and I should have written take care of my puppy 3 I wrote that was my holidays, and I should have written these were my holidays.
1. I wrote:"I was living in my grandparents house" and I should have written"I was living in my grandparent's house". 2. I wrote:"below the mine" and I should have written:"below mine". 3. I wrote:"there were a lot of noise" and I should have written:"there was a lot of noise".
Hi! 1. I wrote:"I went to house with swiming pool." 1.I should have written:" I went to a house with swiming pool". 2.I wrote:"I played a computer games". 2.I should have written:" I palyed computer games." Daniela 8ºA
Hello teacher! I wrote"lots of thinks"and I should have written"lots of thigs" I wrote"exemple" and I should have written"example" I wrote"and the best was" and I should have written"and the best thig was" I wrote"...is that were a big surprise..." and I should have written"...is that was a big surprise" I wrote" In Brazil had parties..." and I should have written "In Brazil there were parties..."
1.I wrote "I visited so mutch iportant citys"
ReplyDelete1.I should have written "I visited so many iportant cities".
2.I wrote "It´s funny".
2.I should have written "It was funny".
3.I wrote "I like a lot walk near the lake(...)"
3.I should have written "I like walking near the lake(...)". Júlia da Silva 8ºA
In the previous post, I wrote: "I only stayed in Leiria like two days" and "The most boring part of my holidays was be at home" - and I should have written: "I only stayed in Leria for two days" and "The most boring part of my holidays was being at home".
ReplyDeleteSara Gonçalves, 8ºA, nº26
I haven't got any mistakes.
ReplyDeleteBye
1- I wrote “In this holidays”, and I should have written “In these holidays”.
ReplyDelete2- I wrote “a 8 year old”, and I should have written “an 8 year old”.
3- I wrote “was passed”, and I should have written “was spent”.
4- I wrote “finnish”, and I should have written “finish”.
5- I wrote “very cool travel”, and I should have written “very cool trip”.
6- I wrote “bodyboard”, and I should have written “body board”.
7- I wrote “and now begins a new journey”, and I should have written “and now a new journey begins”.
Good Bye
Hello teacher!
ReplyDeleteThese are my mistakes:
I wrote "stayed for home" and I should have written "stayed at home"
I wrote "...grandmother's house" and I should have written "...grandmother's"
Finaly I wrote "These are my holidays" and I should have written "These were my holidays" because it's past.
Maria Catarina nº22 8ºD
1 I wrote i , and I should have written I went to the pool.
ReplyDelete2 I wrote puppie , and I should have written take care of my puppy
3 I wrote that was my holidays, and I should have written these were my holidays.
*Leiria
ReplyDeleteSorry my mistake, teacher.
Sara Gonçalves, nº26, 8ºA
hello teacher.
ReplyDeleteI think I haven´t got any mistakes.
I couldn't find any mistakes,teacher.
ReplyDelete1-I wrote “submited to an operation” and I should written “underwent an operation”.
ReplyDelete2-I wrote “I was three days walking all the time” and I should written “ I had to walk for three days”
Good Bye
1- I wrote: "On weekend" and I should have written: "At the weekend"
ReplyDelete2- I wrote "Past few days" and I should have written: "Some days"
Lúcia Nº18 8ºA
1-I wrote"to were Viana",and I should have written"to went Viana"
ReplyDelete2-i wrote"The people in Viana there are good",and I should have written"the people in Viana are cool"
Jonathan,nº14,8ºA
I can´t find any mistakes
ReplyDeleteSara Vedor 8ºA Nº 25
1. I wrote : "In those days went to the beach by day and at night we walked the streets."
ReplyDeleteI should have written : "In the mornings we went to the beach and at night we walked along arowded streets."
2. I wrote : "At the time we went was very hot."
I should have written : " When we arrivedit was very hot."
3. I wrote : "We were one day to the Aqualandia (water park), enjoyed ourselves immensely."
I should have written : " We went to a Aqualandia(water park) and was very nice.
1. I wrote "I was able"
ReplyDelete1. I should have written "would be able"
2. I wrote "In the holidays"
2. I should have written "In these holidays"
1. I wrote:"I was living in my grandparents house" and I should have written"I was living in my grandparent's house".
ReplyDelete2. I wrote:"below the mine" and I should have written:"below mine".
3. I wrote:"there were a lot of noise" and I should have written:"there was a lot of noise".
Hi teacher...
ReplyDeleteI wrote "holiday" and I should have written " holidays" .
Lara 8ºC
I couldn´t find any mistakes
ReplyDeleteHi!
ReplyDelete1. I wrote:"I went to house with swiming pool."
1.I should have written:" I went to a house with swiming pool".
2.I wrote:"I played a computer games".
2.I should have written:" I palyed computer games."
Daniela 8ºA
Hello teacher!
ReplyDeleteI wrote"lots of thinks"and I should have written"lots of thigs"
I wrote"exemple" and I should have written"example"
I wrote"and the best was" and I should have written"and the best thig was"
I wrote"...is that were a big surprise..." and I should have written"...is that was a big surprise"
I wrote" In Brazil had parties..." and I should have written "In Brazil there were parties..."
Hello teacher!
ReplyDeleteI wrote "hould" and I should have written: "would".
And I think thats all.
I wrote "...was to pool their" and I should have written "I went to their pool".
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